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Running Haiku

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Nellers May 2013 7:06pm, 10 May 2013 25,005 posts	Quote Pin Nellers Legs hurt after Half Marathon. It’s your own fault. Should have trained harder, fool. Feelings of great joy! Running is freedom bought cheap. Sad my wings are clipped Over to you, you creative bunch. I'm sure you can do better.
old mum May 2013 7:08pm, 10 May 2013 371 posts	Quote Pin old mum I love Haiku greatly I am however shit at them Over to you, smart arse.
Nellers May 2013 7:15pm, 10 May 2013 25,006 posts	Quote Pin Nellers Form is five-six-five syllables per line or it's not a haiku, dear
Nellers May 2013 7:19pm, 10 May 2013 25,007 posts	Quote Pin Nellers The sun is shining Weather is perfect to run Still, beer and sofa!
HellsBells May 2013 7:20pm, 10 May 2013 15,233 posts	Quote Pin HellsBells Work is very shit Running is much better But I have to work
Nellers May 2013 7:21pm, 10 May 2013 25,008 posts	Quote Pin Nellers
Weean May 2013 7:56pm, 10 May 2013 112 posts	Quote Pin Weean I never like pomes especially not ones with silly rules, yeah? Sorry, need to work on the running aspect. Story of my life...
Weean May 2013 8:29pm, 10 May 2013 113 posts	Quote Pin Weean Oi, Nellers. shouldn't that be five-SEVEN-five? I've made a mockery of the haiku form now (can everyone just pretend I wrote "especially not THE ones"? ta muchly).
Nellers May 2013 8:41pm, 10 May 2013 25,009 posts	Quote Pin Nellers Rumbled! Yes it should be 5-7-5.
Pestomum May 2013 8:50pm, 10 May 2013 2,973 posts	Quote Pin Pestomum If you really do haiku there need to be two parts; two contrasting sections, and mention of the seasons or nature. I did one for a blog once