The Poetry Wire - Going From Bard To Verse

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Diogenes
Today’s dose of Brian:

Jun 2020
7:27am, 3 Jun 2020
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LindsD
Hand that shakes with rage not age :)

And the last verse is genius.
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Peregrinator
What’s making you smile today? by Diogenes ^^^ - making me smile today. And the dose of Bilston.
Jun 2020
10:42am, 8 Jun 2020
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Lizzie W
Madman in the Vegetable Aisle

I am in the market and
there is a girl shopping
for vegetables and
she is picking them up,
tomatoes avocados peppers heads of lettuce
and she is weighing
them, inspecting
them and rejecting
the ones she
thinks she should
reject.

And she is standing
there,
goddess over those vegetables,
two perfect legs running
up to the bottom of
a salmon colored dress
and a mess of
blonde hair.
Her hands are
running through
mounds of broccoli and
she must eat
healthy, I say to myself,
she must be one
of those health food
freaks and she probably runs
all the time and reads
health magazines, I say.

And I am standing
there, pretending to
actually want to
buy vegetables and
pretending to know
what makes a bad vegetable
and what makes a
good one and
I have been in
love once, I say to myself,
and maybe it could
happen again.
Perfect legs, salmon dress.
I could be better, I say,
I could be great, I say
like the movies, I say,
trying to work up
enough courage
to ask her to get coffee,
no, not coffee,
she won’t like coffee she’s one
of those health food freaks
so I decide I’m going
to ask her to go out
for a steak then
realize she probably doesn’t
eat red meat,
focus, I say,
as I am the madman in
the vegetable aisle,
digging my thumbs into
tomatoes and ruining
them.
Sushi!
I will take her to sushi
and I will tell her
stories and won’t drink too
much and I will
write her poems that
aren’t like this one
but
by the time
I’ve arrived at this
conclusion she is
out of the vegetable aisle and
I can’t see her anymore.

Thin, almost clear tomato juice
was running down the
slants of my thumbs and
I sigh and walk back
to the tobacco counter
to buy nicotine gum
so I can quit smoking and think
about the nights
where I would drink too
much and she
wouldn’t be in that salmon
dress and
we would venture into
other people, thinking about
the times that we
were once in love and
how much better that
was.
I would think those
things as she
ate eggs and wheat toast with water for
the 365th consecutive morning
and I would still smoke
and not be able to
remember that day in
the vegetable aisle,
rotting in bed
watching the cooking channel
and she wouldn’t be
a goddess anymore though
she would still be picky with
vegetables and
it’s better for her to
be as she is now.
© 9 years ago, Robert Paulson
Jun 2020
11:44am, 8 Jun 2020
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LindsD
I like that.
Jun 2020
1:20pm, 8 Jun 2020
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Serendippily
Me too
Jun 2020
9:24am, 11 Jun 2020
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Lizzie W
bbc.co.uk
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9:28pm, 11 Jun 2020
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Serendippily
For Purps - Nothing lies between

I went
There was a space
I fell through
A seconds glitch
I landed

What I passed through
I cannot picture
I picked myself up and carried on
Jun 2020
9:31pm, 11 Jun 2020
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Diogenes
Good stuff. I tried and failed to find a transcription of the Agard
Jun 2020
10:07pm, 11 Jun 2020
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Peregrinator
Really appreciating the ideas here. Recently walking I've loved the contrast that the grey sky makes with the oak trees.

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